Kenzie’s story improved

In English, we were learning a defeat the monster text. This week, it was invention week and Kenzie wrote his although it could be made better by adding detail.

Before we edited it: 😀

Ben went in first as Sam staggered behind him. There they were, bodies covered in flames and eyes crimson red and the same evil smirk on nightmare’s face. Nightmare was covered in flames. He stomped towards them. Spark wanted to kill it although it was too late.

After we edited it: 📝